mpsanguis: (Jack/Ianto)
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Even if it feels like beging for comments I'd very much appreciate constructive criticism. First time making icons and all.

1. 2. 3.
4. 5. 6. 7.(for [livejournal.com profile] kel_reiley)
8. (for [livejournal.com profile] blue_fjords)

- credit [livejournal.com profile] godofstrife if taking
- textless icons are not bases
- no hotlinking
- resources

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Date: 2009-06-16 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kel-reiley.livejournal.com
oo, i quite like those
the 2 on the far left: i prefer the coloring of the top one, but i like the framing of the bottom better - jack's face is... er less cut off
top, middle is good
bottom, right is possibly my fave :D

top, right: good framing, but not digging the background texture (there's something that looks like a moon coming out of jack's head)

bottom, middle: the font stands out too much, and that harsh blue streak sort of cuts the image in half, leading the eye to nowhere

um... helpful?

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Date: 2009-06-16 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verasteine.livejournal.com
I'm useless for constructive criticism, because I don't make icons, I just admire them. But I love the bottom row (and if you don't mind, I'm nabbing all of them!) The ones on the top row are a bit too grainy for me -- you can't see straightaway what you're looking at. I love your use of the blue backgrounds, though.

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Date: 2009-06-17 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stargazer60.livejournal.com
I'm snagging #6...will credit!!!

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Date: 2009-06-17 11:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aresnz.livejournal.com
These are awesome. I love the blue backgrounds. Thenks so much for sharing.


Lori

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Date: 2009-06-17 11:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jackieville.livejournal.com
I cannot believe they are your first icons. They're beautiful! I'm not good at giving criticism constructive or otherwise as I'm not an icon maker and technology challenged. I can say that I love them and I'm snagging. I will credit you and thank you very much!

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Date: 2009-06-17 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blue-fjords.livejournal.com
Dude. I like the loyalty one b/c it says loyalty. I am a simple creature, what can I say? Although I will agree w/ kel that maybe the blue streak is a little dark? Maybe "loyalty" on number 6's background? I also like number 3, in spite of not really caring for Jack's "I steal your cereal" face. As for the heads and bodies icons, those aren't really my thing, but then I was a kid in the early 80s and we have way too many studio pics of me and my brother w/ floaty heads and regular bodies, so I think I am programmed to be a little "eh" about them.
Very creative and keep up the good work!

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Date: 2009-06-17 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adjovi.livejournal.com
these are lovely! can i ask where you got the original picture?

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Date: 2009-06-17 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] explodeyy.livejournal.com
The first icon looks insanely similar to this icon i made.
Image
Maybe a coincidence?
Just trying to make sure as I don't want people editing my graphics without my permission.

Great icons though.

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Date: 2009-06-18 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com
These are gorgeous. I snagged some, will credit.